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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:25 pm 
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I wrote this a while ago, I don't really write poetry, stories are my thing (thus the free verse and occasional rhyme when I come up with one):

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Bank holiday in recession Britain,
Wandering the streets of a city not my own,
An early train gets me there, workers toil in the stations.
I reach my destination, the places all quiet- rain pours down,
Hitting my face and suppressing my smile.

If it’s a bank holiday, why are banks open?
Ha! Paradoxes, untruths, all seem to spill and congeal nowadays-
Men aren’t poor and desperate, they’re criminals-
Bankers aren’t usurers, they’re financiers.
All seems so pointless, ridiculous.

The streets fill up, trams run, taxis burn petrol.
Rich and poor gather round cash machines-
Three broken, a machine apologising...it’s come to that.
Men in suits judge scroungers-
I’d be rich, too, if I was the owner and you the worker.

I’m drunk on thoughts of depression and destitution,
The city shows poverty and difference like nothing else can.
Passing punks in Primark, the rich in betting shops... really no places better?
My heart lifts slightly when I think of you, my sweetheart, but even that’s not perfect,
Always difficult, this thing we call living,
No wonder there are people who just want to go and keep tripping.

The suits look at you, they feel righteous,
Just because I’ve drunk so much I have hepatitis.

But I don’t really. I’m clever; I know how to control myself.
Maybe that’s why I get so depressed.
I feel like I’m everyone and no-one, as if I see all these bad things,
Poverty, falseness, as if they’re new churches-
But we’re in a godless world, where there’s just you, and there’s just me.

Everyone makes mistakes; no-one seems to think that though,
All these rules and laws forgetting simple human nature;
Listening to Bob Dylan and Public Enemy, their rhymes cutting up my thoughts,
Simple sounds, simple thoughts, simple things, that’s the best way
Out this apocalypse which only I seem to see,
‘Why are there shops?’ you ask me, yet you know,
It’s because they work, just like crime, power, cunning...
Must I really do those things?
Those men in suits, they look down on all the rest of us from their geometric offices,
But one day I shall be at the top with them...and probably look down like them.
I’m not perfect.

Do I really know anything? Not until I get there, no, I don’t know a thing,
I don’t know what the hell’s at the end of the road, neither do you, neither does anyone,
Suit, punk, poor, rich, snoot, chav, all the same, all ruled by time,
As you watch the crashing stocks and cash in wheelbarrows,
Just remember, it’s all rusted statues.
The city was Nottingham. Fucking depressing, I tell you- that day convinced me I don't want to live in a city.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:33 pm 
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Eh. London's not all that bad.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:41 pm 
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I think living in London would be my own personal hell, but I can definitely see the appeal for folks that don't hate crowds.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:01 pm 
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I can't help but feel we're all avoiding the elephant in the room here.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:26 pm 
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Holy fuck! Where did that elephant come from? I wondered what all the footprints in the butter were.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:40 pm 
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Mechstra wrote:
I can't help but feel we're all avoiding the elephant in the room here.


That righteous and hepatitis don't rhyme?

Also, everyone's view of cities is pretty stereotypical. I mean, some parts of central London are practically deserted, even during rush hour. You can find peace if you want it. :P

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:51 pm 
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FinalSin wrote:
Mechstra wrote:
I can't help but feel we're all avoiding the elephant in the room here.


That righteous and hepatitis don't rhyme?

Well I just meant the poem in general. But if you like.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 11:59 pm 
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Like I say, I don't write poems generally, I just posted it.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
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Also, it's called a half-rhyme, Sinners

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:37 am 
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I want to see a poem from Mechstra. Image

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:43 am 
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I have a book of scots dialect poetry to read, so please don't add to the pain.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:50 am 
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He could post his favourite Runrig lyrics!

I do remember correctly you spaff over runrig's music? Cave was years ago.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:06 am 
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Yeah, Runrig's pretty good.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:09 am 
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There once was a Bassoon, rank Captain,
Who dreamed whilst taking a nap-or-ten,
He met a scarfed llama,
Who proved quite a charmer,
But transpired to be Esther Rant-er-zen.

In a llama suit, obv.

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 Post subject: Re: The poetry corner
PostPosted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 6:46 pm 
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Skippy wrote:
CK wrote:
CK is a very anxious man who doesn't feel comfortable socialising with people. Thus come one summer's day, having received a text enquiring whether he would like to spend the day doing just that, he responded with a poem:

OF SUMMER’S JOY IN MIND CONTAINED

Imagine ourselves of joy obtained,
By intercourse and astute exchange;

In all to avoid the certainty pained,
Of grounding reality soon attained:

That I am a man of no merit ingrained,
But to leave discourse and dialogue strained;

So to duck distress we are instead sustained,
By company’s pleasures of mind contained.


:lol: nice. Did you get a 'u wot???' in response?



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